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She cuts he legs
But no one sees
Her sightless signs
Her voiceless please

She hacks away
With scars to show
She won't cut deep
Just enough to know

To know she lives
And know she's real
To feel real pain
Then just to feel

As the red
Flows down the drain
The water hits blood
Causing searing pain

But no one knows
Behind her smile
She's been crying
All the while
:iconanalog-digital:

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Very old poem

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:iconreignofhearts:
i really like this: it's well written. and honestly it reminds me of myself a bit

--
Music is my life.
Good Music, if I have to be specific.
:iconanalog-digital:
Thank you and I'm sorry.
:iconbabay-shawdow:
This is kinda like my style of writing. 4 lines and the 2 and 4 one rhyme. Great poem ^_^

--
"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.

(quoted by ~kyia6)
:iconanalog-digital:
Thank you so much.. I can't really do the original 5,7,5
:iconbabay-shawdow:
5,7,5 huh...

Isnt that haiku?

--
"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.

(quoted by ~kyia6)
:iconshadowrose-tears:
hey thanks! you wrote my life story for me!
:iconanalog-digital:
Tee hee.. you came to retrieve it!
:iconbabay-shawdow:
Eh. I dun like creating haiku's too difficult and uhh limited ya know?

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"The life you save may be your own"
I want to save me.

(quoted by ~kyia6)

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